LI:Explore and describe about Summer Learning Journey. Today i did family for summer learning journey. This poster is about how i would feel if i have a big family and why or why not? As you see this poster has all of my answers.
Hi Yesha, My name is Patricia and I'm one of the people who will be blogging with you for the Summer Learning Journey. Good job here! I like the fact that you used the poster to create a visual image to support your text and to make it more interesting. Also, it's really good that you are adding the learning intention in your post. For this task you are required to comment how would you feel and if you would enjoy or not being part of a big family with 9 siblings like in the 1800s. I feel that you have only partially answer the question because your poster only have 2 siblings. Furthermore, you mentioned that your "dad and mum would like to meet you", well if they are your parents they would know you anyway despite having siblings or not. In order for you to gain full points for this activity I would like for you to expand your answer a bit more and explain the reasons why it would be good or not to have so many siblings. Could you do that and let me know? I can't wait to read your answer. Kia Kaha, Patricia
Greetings Patricia I feel great even though were a small family, but we care and love each other. Me and my brother enjoy playing on the trampoline.We share and give what we have. We love going somewhere and explore things.My brother and i do fun time at the park and have a good time with my family too.Actually, I have a half brother and half sister in the Philippines. I wish i could meet them and to be together.
I think, small family parents can provide their children a better life but kids can feel loneliness. In big family some parents cannot provide essential needs and good education but they are joyful and happy when they are all together. Regardless a sizes of family, generally both of them they have advantages and disadvantages, but it's still important that families shows love, care and help each other in good times and bad times too.
Hi Yesha, I couldn't agree with you more! I think there are both pros and cons on having a big family but nevertheless the most important thing is that children feel cared and loved. Thanks for expanding your opinion on this topic, I can see that your comments are genuine and authentic. Keep up the good work! I am looking forward to reading your posts. Kia Kaha, Patricia
Hi Yesha,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Patricia and I'm one of the people who will be blogging with you for the Summer Learning Journey.
Good job here! I like the fact that you used the poster to create a visual image to support your text and to make it more interesting.
Also, it's really good that you are adding the learning intention in your post.
For this task you are required to comment how would you feel and if you would enjoy or not being part of a big family with 9 siblings like in the 1800s.
I feel that you have only partially answer the question because your poster only have 2 siblings. Furthermore, you mentioned that your "dad and mum would like to meet you", well if they are your parents they would know you anyway despite having siblings or not.
In order for you to gain full points for this activity I would like for you to expand your answer a bit more and explain the reasons why it would be good or not to have so many siblings. Could you do that and let me know?
I can't wait to read your answer.
Kia Kaha,
Patricia
Greetings Patricia
DeleteI feel great even though were a small family, but we care and love each other. Me and my brother enjoy playing on the trampoline.We share and give what we have. We love going somewhere and explore things.My brother and i do fun time at the park and have a good time with my family too.Actually, I have a half brother and half sister in the Philippines. I wish i could meet them and to be together.
I think, small family parents can provide their children a better life but kids can feel loneliness. In big family some parents cannot provide essential needs and good education but they are joyful and happy when they are all together.
DeleteRegardless a sizes of family, generally both of them they have advantages and disadvantages, but it's still important that families shows love, care and help each other in good times and bad times too.
Hi Yesha,
DeleteI couldn't agree with you more! I think there are both pros and cons on having a big family but nevertheless the most important thing is that children feel cared and loved. Thanks for expanding your opinion on this topic, I can see that your comments are genuine and authentic. Keep up the good work!
I am looking forward to reading your posts.
Kia Kaha,
Patricia