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Reveal (orientation) [Who] [What] [Where] [When]	Panmure Bridge School student performed dance in the school hall on the last week of term 3 on wednesday and thursday. Our family were the audiences.
Events Wednesday Thursday	LS1 got change into their dancing clothes and they sat on the floor in the hall. LS1 waited until all of them are in the hall sitting on the floor. Suddenly all the LS1 students were there then the production started, we were last.   Suddenly the other student were done, So the LS1 student line up and stand up on the stage and get ready to dance. Finally we watch LS1 dance.
Ending	After dance we dismissed to LS1 or LS2 to change back on our normal clothes.

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Dancing Through The Decades

Panmure Bridge School student performed dance in the school hall on the last week of term 3 on wednesday and thursday. Our family were the audiences.

LS1 got change into their dancing clothes and they sat on the floor in the hall

LS1 waited until all of them are in the hall sitting on the floor.

Suddenly all the LS1 students were there then the production started, we were last.  

Suddenly the other student were done,

So the LS1 student line up and stand up on the stage and get ready to dance.

Finally we watch LS1 dance.

After dance we dismissed to LS1 or LS2 to change back on our normal clothes.

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Dancing Through The Decades

Panmure Bridge School student performed dance in the school hall on the last week of term 3 on wednesday and thursday. Our family were the audiences.

LS1 got change into their dancing clothes and they sat on the floor in the hall.

LS1 waited until all of them are in the hall sitting on the floor.

Suddenly all the LS1 students were there then the production started, we were last.  

Suddenly the other student were done,

So the LS1 student line up and stand up on the stage and get ready to dance.

Finally we watched LS1 dance.

After dance, we dismissed to LS1 or LS2 to change back on our normal clothes.

LI:Explore and describe about Writing.
Today i write a recount about Dancing through the decades.
LS1 has been writing about the production which is the dancing through the decades.